* Follow-up r16876, message text is now aligned properly.

git-svn-id: https://svn.code.sf.net/p/rathena/svn/trunk@16883 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

npc/re/cities/mora.txt

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 //= 1.0 First version. [SuperHulk]
 //= 1.1 Translations to English. [Flaid]
 //= 1.1a Standardized. [Euphy]
-//= 1.2 Added new NPCs [Flaid]
+//= 1.2 Added new NPCs. [Flaid]
 //============================================================ 
 
 mora,185,163,5	script	Mora Citizen#1	516,{
@@ -139,31 +139,33 @@ mora,52,138,8	script	Mora Citizen#2	516,{
 
 mora,160,123,5	script	Mora Citizen#3	517,{
 	mes "[Boudril]";
-	mes "Hey,";
-	mes "you seem to be so far from home!";
-	mes "Mora is a remote town";
-	mes "that's why we have our own currency here!";
+	mes "Hey, you seem to be";
+	mes "so far from home!";
+	mes "Mora is a remote town.";
+	mes "That's why we have";
+	mes "own currency here!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Boudril]";
 	mes "Beyond that, our community";
 	mes "developed this craft.";
-	mes "Items found here,";
-	mes "cannot be found anywhere else!";
+	mes "Items found here cannot";
+	mes "be found anywhere else!";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,105,100,3	script	Mora Citizen#4	518,{
 	mes "[Buisso]";
-	mes "Hello my friend,";
-	mes "what brings you to this place, so far from home?";
-	mes "Are you looking for challange?";
+	mes "Hello, my friend.";
+	mes "What brings you to this";
+	mes "place, so far from home?";
+	mes "Are you looking for a challange?";
 	mes "You won't be disappointed here!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Buisso]";
-	mes "We are surrounded by the Bifrost";
-	mes "an area with monsters,";
-	mes "powerful and deceitful...";
-	mes "So cute but still dangerous.";
+	mes "We are surrounded by the";
+	mes "Bifrost, an area with powerful";
+	mes "and deceitful monsters...";
+	mes "So cute, but still dangerous.";
 	close;
 }
 
@@ -175,10 +177,10 @@ mora,98,104,4	script	Mora Citizen#5	516,{
 	mes "My dream was to be like you!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Malavida]";
-	mes "Travel around the world,";
+	mes "Traveling around the world,";
 	mes "chasing monsters,";
-	mes "hunt treasures all of the world...";
-	mes "You have the chance... Use it!";
+	mes "hunting treasure...";
+	mes "You have the chance. Use it!";
 	close;
 }
 
@@ -186,20 +188,22 @@ mora,102,107,6	script	Mora Citizen#6	517,{
 	mes "[Skape]";
 	mes "Have you tasted our dish?";
 	mes "The beef toast!?";
-	mes "What about this delicious beef";
-	mes "that only exists in the Bifrost?";
+	mes "This delicious beef only";
+	mes "exists in the Bifrost!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Skape]";
-	mes "If you want to taste this dish";
-	mes "visit our chef.";
-	mes "He makes the best Mora toast beef!";
+	mes "If you want to taste this";
+	mes "dish, visit our chef.";
+	mes "He makes the best";
+	mes "Mora beef toast!";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,101,107,4	script	Mora Citizen#7	518,{
 	mes "[Wouadel Kami]";
 	mes "*Dances*";
-	mes "I'm a choreographer, but nobody understands me.";
+	mes "I'm a choreographer, but";
+	mes "nobody understands me.";
 	mes "*doridori*";
 	mes "*bingbing*";
 	mes "*bangbang*";
@@ -209,8 +213,8 @@ mora,101,107,4	script	Mora Citizen#7	518,{
 mora,103,100,6	script	Mora Citizen#8	518,{
 	mes "[Didier Lans]";
 	mes "Yooo gaba gaba!";
-	mes "Hello my dear, you've heard";
-	mes "about my teaching, isn't it that?";
+	mes "Hello, my dear. You've heard";
+	mes "about my teachings, have you?";
 	mes "Do not hit your friends!";
 	mes "*makes small steps backwards*";
 	next;
@@ -219,61 +223,62 @@ mora,103,100,6	script	Mora Citizen#8	518,{
 	mes "Eat your vegetables.";
 	mes "*is the fool*";
 	mes "Be smart, be polite!";
-	mes "Yooo Gaba Gaba!";
+	mes "Yooo gaba gaba!";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,184,169,3	script	Mora Citizen#9	516,{
 	mes "[Moussa Wi]";
-	mes "Bleh, I've been here";
-	mes "for too long.";
-	mes "Live with this dogs...";
-	mes "Nothing to do...";
-	mes "Hmmm, how about you take care of them?";
+	mes "Bleh, I've been";
+	mes "here for too long.";
+	mes "Living with these dogs...";
+	mes "Having nothing to do...";
+	mes "Hmm, how about you";
+	mes "take care of them?";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,108,182,3	script	Mora Citizen#10	516,{
 	mes "[Yosou Keh]";
-	mes "Hello,";
-	mes "I am Yosou Keh!";
-	mes "I am a resident of Mora";
+	mes "Hello!";
+	mes "I am Yosou Keh,";
+	mes "a resident of Mora.";
 	mes "The Bifrost is populated";
-	mes "by all these strong monsters...";
+	mes "with many strong monsters...";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,113,185,5	script	Mora Citizen#11	516,{
 	mes "[Ninkasi]";
-	mes "Hey dude.";
-	mes "How are you today dude?";
-	mes "What can I do for you dude?";
+	mes "Hey, dude.";
+	mes "How are you today, dude?";
+	mes "What can I do for you, dude?";
 	next;
-	switch(select("Why do you call me dude?:Goodbye.")) {
+	switch(select("Why do you call me 'dude'?:Goodbye.")) {
 	case 1:
 		mes "[Ninkasi]";
 		mes "Why not?";
-		mes "Calling others dude is my brand mark.";
-		mes "Be cool dude, relax yourself!";
-		mes "Enjoy your life dude!";
-		break;
+		mes "Calling others 'dude'";
+		mes "is my brand mark.";
+		mes "Be cool, dude, relax!";
+		mes "Enjoy your life, dude!";
+		close;
 	case 2:
 		mes "[Ninkasi]";
 		mes "See you again, dude!";
-		break;
+		close;
 	}
-	close;
 }
 
 mora,43,127,4	script	Mora Citizen#12	522,{
 	mes "[Glouti Vori]";
-	mes "Hmmm, I love this beef toast!";
-	mes "That's the only reason I am still here!";
-	mes "There's nothing better than Mora beef toast!";
+	mes "Mm, I love this beef toast!";
+	mes "That's the only reason I'm";
+	mes "still here! There's nothing";
+	mes "better than Mora beef toast!";
 	close;
 }
 
-//===================================
 mora,35,119,7	script	South World Dealer	513,{
 	mes "[South World Dealer]";
 	mes "...";
@@ -282,25 +287,35 @@ mora,35,119,7	script	South World Dealer	513,{
 
 mora,139,102,4	script	Milvida	515,{
 	mes "[Milvida]";
-	mes "Welcome to Mora~ In the center of the city you can find all shops and some enchanters.";
+	mes "Welcome to Mora~";
+	mes "In the center of the city";
+	mes "you can find all the shops";
+	mes "and some enchanters.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Milvida]";
-	mes "Northeast of the city is where you can find food here.";
+	mes "Northeast of the city is";
+	mes "where the food is located.";
 	close;
 }
 
 mora,55,124,2	script	Cat Traveler	495,{
 	mes "[Cat Traveler]";
-	mes "This city is like Malangdo on several aspects, don't you think?";
+	mes "This city is like Malangdo";
+	mes "in several aspects,";
+	mes "don't you think?";
 	close;
 }
 
-mora,131,165,4	script	Bifrost resident#1	520,{
+mora,131,165,4	script	Bifrost Resident#1	520,{
 	mes "[Bifrost resident]";
-	mes "Welcome to the workshop of the west clan.";
-	mes "If you want your Loki Muffler enchanted, please contact my boss, he makes miracles!";
+	mes "Welcome to the workshop";
+	mes "of the west clan. If you";
+	mes "want your Loki Muffler";
+	mes "enchanted, please contact";
+	mes "my boss. He makes miracles!";
 	next;
 	mes "[Bifrost resident]";
-	mes "P/S: On a side note, I think I am really cute... Don't you think?";
+	mes "On a side note... I think I'm";
+	mes "really cute, don't you agree?";
 	close;
 }